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ships float best on salted eyes, dry. They
are full of holes, these boats, and would
rather be assigned wheels than sails. Sentences,
fortunately, look more like switchback roads
than prevailing wind or current. So we drive,
and the intermittently vigorous backseat
driver demands a different gear, a new
station, a softer hand on the wheel.